The Greatest Exploitation — Part I
“The greatest exploitation lies not in chains, but in making someone worship their own cage.”
Evenings have a strange way of repeating themselves.
Manav and Manvi returned home as they did every night — the same gate, the same elevator hum, the same silence that had started feeling heavier than any argument. The walls remembered their laughter better than they did.
It had been two years since their wedding — a grand, glittering celebration that made everyone except the two of them happy. There had been blessings, rituals, promises, and pictures — thousands of them. Everyone said they looked perfect together.
Perfection — the cruelest word in human vocabulary. It ends where life begins.
The first few months were golden.
Love was new, and everything that is new carries the illusion of eternity.
They found reasons to hold hands, to cook together, to dream together. The honeymoon in Zurich was straight out of a postcard — snow-capped Alps, clean air that almost forced people to smile, and the kind of silence that lets new lovers believe they’ve discovered peace.
But peace is deceptive. It doesn’t always mean harmony.
Sometimes, it’s just the calm before realization.
They came back with memories, souvenirs, and a little fear — that of accidental pregnancy. For a few weeks, they lived with that anxiety, secretly imagining what it would be like to raise a child. Then came relief — it was a false alarm.
But the relief also carried a subtle dread.
From that day onward, their intimacy wore caution like perfume. What was once natural, started feeling rehearsed. What was once passion now required permission.
You see, love doesn’t die in a day.
It rots slowly — in silence, in schedules, in unspoken calculations.
Soon the days began blending into each other.
The calls became shorter, the smiles more practiced. Flowers gave way to grocery lists, and dinner dates were replaced by visits from relatives who spoke as if their happiness were a shared project.
Manav’s friends laughed too loudly; Manvi’s cousins stayed too long. Each visit felt like a polite punishment. She played the perfect host, but inside her head, she screamed for silence. He pretended interest in people who bored him to the point of suffocation.
And like most slow deaths, it wasn’t an explosion that ended things — it was erosion.
Small misunderstandings.
Shortened hugs.
Sentences that ended in sighs.
Manvi wanted conversation — not about bills, not about people, but about meaning. She wanted to ask, “What are we doing here?” but she knew he wouldn’t understand.
Manav wanted warmth — the kind that melts the ice between two silences. But every time he tried, he met a wall.
They were two halves of a circle that refused to close.
Gifts lost meaning too. Every gesture was analyzed, priced, and doubted.
He stopped buying flowers because she saw them as guilt.
She stopped cooking his favorite meal because he thought it was manipulation.
They didn’t fight over big things. They fought over the remains of what once mattered.
And yet, to the outside world, they were perfect.
They smiled in pictures, hosted dinners, attended weddings.
You’d think they were made for each other.
But they were merely made by each other’s families.
Sometimes, love is not a choice — it’s a well-decorated agreement between two exhausted expectations.
Their parents had arranged their union with the same pride with which people display trophies.
And now that trophy was gathering dust.
Finally, after months of tension, they decided to talk to the ones who had built this arrangement — their families. A dinner was planned.
It was meant to be a discussion.
But discussions in Indian families often end before they begin.
That night, the house was full — food, laughter, and the comforting noise of denial. After some polite conversations, Manav tried to speak. His voice trembled.
“We’re not happy,” he said. “We’ve tried, but something feels broken.”
Everyone went silent. Then, as if on cue, came the unanimous verdict:
“You should have a baby. That will fix everything.”
And there it was — the most common solution to human emptiness.
When two adults fail to heal, they summon a third soul and call it “hope.”
Manvi’s lips parted, and years of suppressed truth rushed out.
“A baby?” she said. “You want me to bring a child into this mess when I’m not even sure I want to live with him anymore?”
Her mother tried to calm her down.
“Beta, every marriage goes through this. Believe me. Take the plunge. Everything will fall in place.”
Manvi laughed — not out of humor, but disbelief.
“Believe you? You said the same when you made me marry him. You liked him, not me. Even when I said I wanted to figure out my life, you called me confused. You treated my independence as rebellion, not growth. I believed you then. Look where it got me.”
The room froze.
Her words had broken a code — the sacred rule of pretending.
Manav’s mother snapped.
“What do you mean you don’t want to live with my son? He’s one in a million! You’re lucky to have him. He’s obedient, educated, successful. Everyone loves him!”
Manvi turned toward her — calm, but burning.
“If you really love your son so much, why do you never listen to him?
When did you last ask him what he really wants? What scares him? What makes him feel alive? You raised him to be perfect for society, not for himself. You loved him when he was speechless. But when he learned to speak, you stopped listening.”
Silence.
The kind that bends time.
Parents often think they’re raising children.
They’re actually raising reflections of their own insecurities — well-trained to never question the mirror.
Manav’s mother began crying. “How dare you say that! I’ve cared for him since birth. I’ve sacrificed everything!”
“You did,” said Manvi. “But you forgot to let him live. You fed his body and starved his soul. And now I’m paying for your actions.”
The fathers in the room remained silent — confused, powerless, exposed.
Men who had built their lives on control had no vocabulary for vulnerability.
What could they say when their weapons — anger, authority, silence — had lost their power?
Manvi’s mother finally spoke.
“Why do you say you were alone growing up? We gave you everything — education, comfort, marriage into a good family. We spent everything for your happiness. What more could we have done?”
Manvi smiled through tears.
“You gave me everything except trust. You believed in my degrees but not my decisions. You invested in my life but never in my choice. You taught me to think, but punished me when I did. Even if I had failed, at least it would have been my failure.”
'We are a generation carrying the wounds of love that came without freedom'.
A pause. A silence heavier than any scream.
Then Manav’s mother cried out again, her pain merging with anger:
“What’s wrong with my son? Doesn’t he love you? Doesn’t he give you freedom? What more do you want?”
Manvi looked up — calm, almost detached.
“We have no chemistry. No soul between us. We never explored each other’s minds; there was no time, no curiosity. We’re two strangers sharing a house, pretending to be in love because our families can’t accept failure. When I see him, I feel nothing — not hate, not affection. Just emptiness.”
Then all eyes turned to Manav. His mother barked, “Say something! Defend yourself!”
He looked at her — the same eyes that once sought her approval now filled with quiet rebellion.
“I have nothing to defend,” he said.
“You chose my schools, my subjects, my food, my wife. Every time I wanted something different, you called it immature. I never wanted to marry her — not yet, not this way. I wanted time to understand who I am. But you were impatient. You mistook obedience for love. So I obeyed. And in the process, I lost my voice.”
He paused. The words hung in the air like confession and curse.
“When I finally moved out, I thought I could learn myself again. But even then, your expectations followed me. You called it love. I call it control.”
The room fell silent. No one cried now.
Because deep down, everyone knew — this wasn’t about Manav and Manvi anymore. It was about all of them.
It was about every son who became a machine of obedience,
and every daughter who became a trophy of compromise.
In every culture, there’s a silent factory that manufactures “good children.”
Their only product is adults who mistake suffering for duty.
Manvi looked at Manav. For a moment, both were quiet — not in anger, but recognition.
They weren’t enemies. They were victims of the same programming, different sides of the same illusion.
She whispered, “We didn’t choose each other, did we?”
He looked down. “No. We were chosen by people who never asked what we wanted.”
The mothers cried louder now, as if noise could drown truth.
The fathers stared into their plates.
And in that room, amid half-eaten food and unspoken guilt, something sacred died — not their marriage, but the myth that had built it.
That night, they returned home without speaking.
The car ride back was silent. The road stretched endlessly, but neither of them saw it.
Streetlights passed in rhythm — one bright, one dark, one bright, one dark — exactly how their days had been lately.
She looked out of the window, watching the city flicker like a dying conscience.
He drove, eyes fixed ahead, as if motion alone could save him from collapse.
No one spoke. There was nothing left to say that could sound human anymore.
Words had lost their innocence.
When they reached home, the house looked smaller than it ever had — not because of size, but because of truth.
The walls seemed to whisper, “Welcome back to your cage.”
Manvi entered first. She walked straight to the bedroom, not even bothering to turn on the lights.
The faint orange glow from the street outside drew a line across her face — half light, half shadow — like a cruel metaphor for her life.
Manav stood near the doorway for a while, keys still in hand, unsure if he was home or inside a memory that refused to fade.
He poured himself a drink. The sound of liquid hitting glass felt louder than it should.
He sat on the couch, staring at nothing.
She sat on the edge of the bed, doing the same.
Two people, one roof, zero connection.
And then, for reasons neither could explain, both began to cry — quietly at first, then helplessly.
Tears that had waited for years found their way out.
Not the kind of crying that seeks comfort — but the kind that announces defeat.
He cried for the boy who had obeyed too much.
She cried for the girl who had trusted too soon.
They didn’t cry for each other. They cried for themselves — for everything they’d lost trying to become what others expected.
Some silences scream.
Some tears are revolutions that never make the news.
The air between them was thick — not with hatred, but exhaustion.
The kind of exhaustion that doesn’t come from working hard, but from living wrong.
Outside, a dog barked in the distance.
Inside, a life ended without sound.
He looked at her through the dim light.
She didn’t look back.
Because sometimes, when pain becomes too deep, even eye contact feels like violence.
Love doesn’t always end with betrayal.
Sometimes, it just dies quietly — starved of understanding, buried under duty.
The clock struck midnight.
He finished his drink.
She wiped her face with the edge of her saree.
For the first time, they were together and utterly alone.
Two humans who once promised forever — now weeping for the strangers they had become.
And perhaps this is how most stories end —
not with explosions, not with closure,
but with two souls quietly breaking inside a house that still calls itself home.
[End of Part I — To be continued]

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